Space between Me & You : एकांत में ब्रह्माण्ड है

Core thought : This poem tries to capture the cosmic distance between individuals in a relationship. When there is a distance between two persons and they are not clinging to each other, Then One can see and soak the beauty of other in totality.


मुझे तुम्हारे पास भी रहना है और दूर भी
ब्रह्माण्ड और कुछ नहीं..
मेरे और तुम्हारे एकांत का विस्तार है


International Version

In the same frame of time
I want to be close to you
And far.. far away..
galaxies of thoughts receding
burning desires like comets
I feel a zero gravity in our relationship
can see millions of your flares, colours,
your free forms & shapes
feels like Big Bang of individualities
It seems the Universe resides..
In the Space between me and you


© Siddharth Tripathi ✍️ SidTree

4 Replies to “Space between Me & You : एकांत में ब्रह्माण्ड है”

  1. Sir, you hv mentioned ” दिल की बात लिखिए” on the upper side of comment box of your website. I didn’t notice before, may be it is already updated from the starting, but मुझे ये बहुत पसंद आया और देखने में भी ज्यादा अच्छा लगता है। Now I feel more comfortable and feel free to write my thoughts or opinion about your poems and I do not hesitate to write my feelings regarding your poems .🙂🤗 thankuuu so much Sir..!!😇😀

  2. So Beautiful Sir…!!👌 I liked the hindi version most than international. सिर्फ तीन लाइन और इतना गहरा मतलब। ☺😇 Simply Awesome..!!👍

  3. Beautiful words with Mind touching emotions. Soul Touching Poem Sid sir.😇Every Line Is Heart Touching. Best Poem.Hame poem aapki voice main or Bhi aachi lagti hain.

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